struggling with my writing course.

My new course is "Article Writing".  We practice writing article.  Two weeks ago, our assignment was about writing LEAD.

I chose an article about "money", which actually I am interested in.  Please check out my writing, if you have any comment, please write to me.


[the Original lead]
INIDVIDUAL investors can’t do much to improve the miserable performance of the stock market, but they may be able to help their own portfolios.
(New York Times Business: http://www.nytimes.com/2009/02/01/business/01fund.html)

[makeover of the lead]
INIDVIDUAL investors do not have to give up the stock's bad performing. If they make use of such negative situation with positive perspective, they may be able to help their own portfolios. It means that all they can do is regard such situation as a chance to make a profit.

 This is the new style of investment for all kinds of business. Here comes the time to switch our minds to coping with diversity of changes. 

 

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